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A ray of light hit my head
Looking up, I blinked my eyes
My heart missed a beat
The gaping roof beckoned me
Looking up, I blinked my eyes
My heart missed a beat
The gaping roof beckoned me
Out I flew,
The winds caressed me, lifted me in ecstasy
Heart strings vibrating
Sweet melody enveloped me
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FREEDOM!!!
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Heart strings vibrating- That’s my favourite phrase, Geeta! Love the hope and freedom in this one.
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Glad Shailaja that you liked it.
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A truly charming piece. 🙂
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Beautifully capturing the essence of freedom!
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I love how you take us right through the roof with you!
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Sweet song of freedom : )
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Beautiful expression of freedom! And I really like the photos too 🙂
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Beautiful!
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You certainly captured in detail how a caged bird feels when they discover freedom is within their reach! Well done! ♥
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flying in the open blue sky—Must be wonderful…Good one.
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Freedom to be oneself…that’s what the bird also needs. Lovely poem, Geeta!
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ahhh freedom.. bliss 🙂 lovely write.
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Freedom and happiness..always a lovely combo!
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